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The waves crashing around me
remind me of a happy time.
This wind, it whips and snatches
my hair away from my face,
it never lets me hide.
I am the weathered, the broken shell
washed up on the stony shore.
The pieces missing are surely my eyes,
because I can never see your face again.
I may be a rocky building,
that has seen the hands of time
mold the lands according to its will,
just like you did to me.
aim of this: strong imagery.

enjoy :)
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robert-kim-karen Featured By Owner May 14, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Very strong imagery accomplished. This would go good with photo manip composition, lady on the sea edge, at the top of a cliff kinda thing.
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jeweljk Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
I think I've done that sort of photomanip a long time ago :) "When Angels Fly Away" maybe? or some other one i cant remember the title of that was done yonks ago! Thank you :) :hug: I had completely forgotten I wrote this, I no longer remember why I wrote it and what caused it!
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robert-kim-karen Featured By Owner May 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Could'nt find that one. Perhaps you could show me?

I enjoy when somebody notices one of my older shots, reminds me of stuff I've forgotten about too.
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jeweljk Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
ah it doesnt matter, it was really old so not that skilled :)
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AStrangerInTheNight Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
your aim was straight and true as you got it there well done
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jeweljk Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
thank you :)
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