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A Storm

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The waves crashing around me
remind me of a happy time.
This wind, it whips and snatches
my hair away from my face,
it never lets me hide.
I am the weathered, the broken shell
washed up on the stony shore.
The pieces missing are surely my eyes,
because I can never see your face again.
I may be a rocky building,
that has seen the hands of time
mold the lands according to its will,
just like you did to me.
aim of this: strong imagery.

enjoy :)
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robert-kim-karen's avatar
Very strong imagery accomplished. This would go good with photo manip composition, lady on the sea edge, at the top of a cliff kinda thing.